Poetry "Who Do I Think I am"

Discussion in 'Poetry and Words of Wisdom' started by rhitland, Jul 1, 2009.

  1. rhitland

    rhitland Founding Member Premium Member

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    I love poetry b/c I can throw proper grammar and spelling to the wind to get my emotions across or at least us that as an excuse! lol :) These 2 I posted I wrote shortly after high school.


    Who Do I Think I am


    Put things in order as your Told
    Put things in order before you grow Old
    It’s not supposed to Matter
    For when you fall you do not Shatter
    We love as were Told, very seldom creating our Own
    In the sun we dance, with the moon we Howl
    I must rejoice for I am the Cow
    I’m thankful to my past, for creating me in the Now

    I’m in charge & it does have Meaning
    I know cause when were cut we all start Bleeding
    Some are different starting from a Seedling
    But we are all the Same
    Only nature is to Blame

    If I knew the answer True
    It would not be the same for You
    This life is Yours
    In your mind exciting or Chores
    So do as you please
    Hell I don’t cover when I Sneeze

    Only you can Determine
    If Life is relaxing or seems if you’re always Squirmin’
    So do as you Must
    Eat the pie and the Crust
    Trusting in yourself

    Who are we and why do we Exist
    Stop worrying,
    I promise it ends with a Twist
     
  2. Jay

    Jay Registered User

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    Brother Rhit, You are indeed a poeit and have a strong mind.I like and agree with you. It brings to mind what our masonic Brother William shakespeare said :TO THY OWN SELF BE TRUE AND KNOW THY SELF. I think you say it well in your poem.
     
  3. Blake Bowden

    Blake Bowden Administrator Staff Member

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    Awesome work!
     
  4. scottmh59

    scottmh59 Registered User

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    :kev:very nice
     
  5. Sirius

    Sirius Registered User

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    That absa-f'ing-lootley made my day! Thanks Rhit!:humble:
     
  6. JTM

    JTM "Just in case" Premium Member

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    sweet. wonderful post.

    nominated/thanked.
     

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