Some great information in your presentation, Brother, but it falls into the same trap the majority of people who create power point presentations find themselves in. The slides are mostly just walls of texts and bullet points to read through. Slide 13 had the right idea, though. Ideally, this information should be in a paper instead of a power point presentation.
I recommend an article from 2013 by Mitch Joel that helped open my eyes about how I format my presentations.
https://www.sixpixels.com/articles/archives/powerpoint_doesnt_suck_you_do/
The majority of us have sat through horrible presentations by brothers who stood in front of us and basically read each slide as they clicked through them. They even have a name for it, "Death by Power Point." I was an instructor in law enforcement for several years in the late 90's and early 00's and this is how we were taught to use power point, just lay out your training plan on the screen with lots of bullet points and go over them with the class. But that is not the way this technology was ever intended to be used. One of the greatest gifts we can give to the future of our Fraternity is to put in place good training programs that help develop future presenters who know how to structure presentations using the available technology.